Hi, I am looking for self confident and determined vocals, can be a bit naughty, for a Rock’n Roll influenced hybrid song.
Please follow the Audio brief link for my suggestion of the vocal melody and lyrics (one verse, one chorus at 0:23).
I am excited and looking forward to find you and your voice, bringing my song to a shine with your expression.
The mood of the voice should express some self ironic perspective on being, resolved to step out, turn and start living.
The vocal melody should sound close to the one you can listen to on soundcloud via audio brief link, it need not be exactly the same. If you like to adapt it to your style and own expression, I am fine with that. I do not stick on each note of my melody and welcome, if you have a better idea. The pitch of the song can be slightly adjusted, however, some instruments are sample based and cannot be shifted too far.
As I am no native speaker I appreciate improvements in lyrics in case some words sound odd or even have bad grammar.
LYRICS:
VERSE 1
Slip out of this cosy skin, get out of your bin
Jump out of this fish bowl and forget if it's a sin
Caught inside this crazy pot, floating with whole lot
Move bejond your routine, start to rewrite your own plot
VERSE 2
Do you need all that you have and have all that you need ?
Feeling forced to nowhere you're the only one to lead
Drilled to run machinery, find the doors to flee
No more feed the system and escape for being free
VERSE 3
Squeeced between agenda wheels, stop to be their slave
Guide yourself at home, feel, put your notes between the stave
Tightened blinkers on your head, who has set the track ?
Break out of the treadmill and the rat race without slack
VERSE 4
Trick this monster, stop to feed, forth and back proceed
Distrust any leaders and their walls that so mislead
Crooked and shaped to fit the box, cared within the norm
Find the keys for your locks, burst the bondage to perform
CHORUS
Don't stay conform remain
Else you deform insane
No induced duty, discipline, no head in the bin
Don't shelter in constraints
Shivering heart so faint
No induced guilt, your sorrow built, tight in your skin
BRIDGE
Reveal your feel
Trust your appeal
Retract this deal
OUTRO
Part of to be
Got cease to flee
And you'll be free
LISTEN TO AUDIO BRIEF